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07-23-2011, 09:16 PM
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Jaan Se Pyara Dekha
Asslam o Alaikum
 Apni likhi hui ik naqis koshish k sath hazir e Khidmat hon. Mein koi proper poet nhe hon so mistakes ki nishan dahi zaroor keejiyay ga but unhein mind nhe keejiyay ga Thanks in Advance  |
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07-24-2011, 09:10 PM
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wah bro kamal poetry hai aap ki
reallllly maza a gia parh kar |
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07-26-2011, 11:30 PM
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Aap ko pasand aai yeh jaan k khushi hui
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07-28-2011, 08:09 AM
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Jab Main Ye Parh Rahi Thi I was Sure Kuch To Mistake Karen Gay Aap But It's Awesom...
Very sweet n Lovingly written.. Lag Hi Nahin Raha Tha K Aap Ne Khud Likhi Hai... keep writing ... Aap bht Acha Likhte Hain... thxxxx |
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07-30-2011, 10:36 PM
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Aap ki is qadar tareef aur hosla afzaai ka bohat mashkoor hon
Yaqeeni tor pe is mein abhi b bohat khamiyan hon gi jo k koi proper poet zaroor nikaal day ga like ozaan o behar ka mujay kuch ata pata nhe han qafia radeef ka khayal rakha hy Heartiest Thanks For ur kind words |
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08-18-2011, 10:43 AM
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Bohat hi umada zauq hy appka
Keep posting.
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08-28-2011, 06:47 PM
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Thanks Sara Khan For Liking
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09-07-2011, 05:44 AM
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very good efforrt keep it up i am waiting for next one
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